About:
I will go through a digital copy of your rule book with the goal of offering notes that I think will help make the rules easily understandable without a copy of the game.
The main service I'm offering is a page by page honest opinion of how I think the rule book flows, and most importantly how it reads to someone new to the game. I will offer suggestions on improvements I think could be made along the way. Any form of the rule book is fine *Nearly finished, no graphics ETC* I will then send you all my notes written on the pages.
All done digitally! Please be sure to send either a PDF or individual picture of each page.
Credentials:
I have read thousands of rule booklets in my time running Bower's Game Corner https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCaGg_BXr-jWyclqSMWfBo1g
Also to clarify this is less about me looking for missing commas , misspellings ETC, but rather focusing entirely on the rules/ how they hit the reader.
Reviews
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very honest with his feedback and gave great advice. I am making my first board game and he really helped me understand what should and should not be in the rulebook and pointed out a lot of redundancies in my rules.
:great advice!! 👍
:Quick way to run a Litmus Test for your Rule Book.
:I am remarkably pleased with the seller`s work and the delivery was quick.
:If you're looking for someone to stroke your game designer ego, this is the wrong Gig. If you're looking for someone who eats, drinks, and sleeps gaming that will give you an honest opinion; you are in the right place. Forrest is a "Gamer's Gamer", and he has an impeccable insight on how rulebooks should flow. Not only is he thorough, but he also goes above and beyond to help your game's overall appeal.
